sábado, 12 de julio de 2014

SUMMARY: What is “Academic” Writing?

Santiago Mazzei
Teacher: Stella Maris Saubidet
Lengua y Expresión Escrita IV-ISFD 41
July, 2014

What is “Academic” Writing?

          L. Lennie Irvin

INTRODUCTION: THE ACADEMIC WRITING TASK

Since the development of a written text is not easy and being proficient at it is of great importance for communicating ideas, you must take this lesson as something precious. The present section has the aim of making things easier for you when having to successfully accomplish an academic writing task and giving you a first idea of what this type of writing is about.
In academic writing, the comprehension of your procedure and the right strategy lead to success. We therefore have to get rid of some misinterpretations about certain aspects of the subject before dealing with the most relevant issues.

MYTHS ABOUT WRITING

The following wrong concepts drive writers to unsuccessful results:

1.     Writing is an inflexible straight procedure. As a matter of fact, we go all over again through the different stages of the writing process as we proceed with a task.
2.     One has to have everything sorted out before writing. The truth is that new ideas may come up as we perform the writing task. We can add, remove or rephrase anything later.
3.     A first draft has to be definite and excelling. Again, successful writing takes going all over through the process as many times as necessary.
4.     One is determined to write in a certain way and cannot become a better writer.
5.     I cannot write if I am not good at grammar. “Writing is about achieving your desired effect upon an intended audience.” (Irvin, 2010, p. 5)
6.     I have to stick to/reject the five-paragraph essay. It is beneficial to know it, but it is just a base model that you will leave behind as you improve your way of writing.
7.     I must avoid the use of “I”. In semi-formal style, it is not wrong to implement it.

Ø     The Academic Writing Situation

Since the most important mistakes in academic writing are connected to an inadequate comprehension of the general “writing situation” (Irvin, 210, p. 5), it is necessary to go over the contrast between spoken and written productions.

In speaking, three dimensions are dealt with, whereas in writing, only two. We therefore have to mentally bring about the contextual circumstances.

It is of great importance that you grow a “writer’s sense” (Irvin, 2010, p. 6) not beyond the writing circumstances.

Looking More Closely at the “Academic Writing” Situation

Academic writing has “its own codes and conventions” (Irvin, 2010, p. 7). You have to know:

ü     Your audience,
ü     The context,
ü     Your message,
ü     Your purpose,
ü     The documents or genres used.

Lee Ann Carroll has evidenced the type of writing you are likely to deal with in an academic context.

Since a good familiarity with research skills, a clear understanding of complicated texts, an ability to summarize and a developed critical sense are required in university apart from the usual writing skills, Carroll claims that ‘writing assignments’ should be defined as ‘literacy tasks’.

Writing in college has evaluative purposes so you have to reflect your excellence and your capacities. It is therefore useful to get into the aspects of a “literacy task”.

Ø     Knowledge of Research Skills

Knowing the right way of finding information anywhere and understanding that Research is procedural (constant focus on the different origins of your information is required) are a must. It is also necessary to become aware of that the research of information plays a determining role within the writing task, and thus a lot of effort has to be invested in the process.

Ø     The Ability to Read Complex Texts

Critical thinking in the reading process is a must: detecting nonobjectivity and presumptions, as well as ”making inferences” -how we relate the different parts of (a) text/s.

…an inference is a belief (or statement) about something unknown made on the basis of something known […] based upon the known factors we discover from our reading […] our job becomes to get our readers to make the same inferences we have made (Irvin, 2010, p. 8).

Ø     The Understanding of Key Disciplinary Concepts

Teachers are going to want to see how you utilize and manipulate the concepts you have been asked for in your writing assignments. They want you to show them what you have learnt. So analyze carefully for what concepts they want you to implement into your work.

Ø     Strategies for Synthesizing, Analyzing, and Responding Critically to New Information

Developing tactics for extracting relevant information to later utilize it in your assignment is a must. The acquisition of methods for the organization and identification of relevant schemes in any new material is a necessity.

IN COLLEGE, EVERYTHING’S AN ARGUMENT: A GUIDE FOR DECODING COLLEGE WRITING ASSIGNMENTS

In academic writing you will have the necessity of presenting a conjecture in which you make a statement (called the “thesis”) and standing for it with effective arguments supported by properly introduced corroborative elements. This can be confusing for new learners, so it deserves a deeper analysis.

Ø     Academic Writing Is an Argument

A point of view that is founded on proper evidence is called an “argument”. That point of view has to receive your examiner’s approval. You have to be convincing by providing grounds for belief. To be successful, a well-structured display of your argument and solid elements that support it are needed.

Ø     Academic Writing Is an Analysis

One has to know what the teacher’s expectations are. In some cases these remain tacit, and thus difficult to detect. In the first place, summarize only if you are told to do so. Secondly, your resulting work will depend directly on your previous analysis of the subject matter.

Analyzing implies following:

1.     Carry out an investigation and remain open-minded towards the various possible answers that you may find.
2.     Detect the relevant pieces of information.
3.     Study these isolated pieces of information and find out the way in which they are connected to each other.

New notions will come up from the isolation and inspection of the different items of information that conform the subject of your essay. At the same time, your point of view of the way in which these different pieces of information connect with each other conforms your thesis statement, and the objective of your work is to place an argument that defends that point of view validating it and making it a solid one. Separate the different pieces of your investigation and take notes of the particular features of each. As new schemes show up, you have to consistently relate each element. Analysis is an extremely important element of the “literacy task”.

Ø     Three Common Types of College Writing Assignments

There are three types of college writing tasks:

Ø     The Closed Writing Assignment

Two opposing statements are presented, and you have to decide (based on your research) which the most solid is. The important part of your work is showing the way in which you arrived at that conclusion.

A deeper inspection of the main issue may lead you to ambiguous assumptions. Do not use a “simplistic thesis” (Irvin, 2010, p. 12).

Ø     The Semi-Open Writing Assignment

“Discuss […] Explain […] Compare […] Show how…” (Irvin, 2010, p. 12)

Avoid using statements that are too obvious. Make relations between the sort of elements you are going to use, their natural origin and role and what leads to them. You have to “dig […] and see what you find” (Irvin, 2010, p. 12).

Do not summarize or merely account for things in this type of essay. Bringing an argument up is also required. Your professors will want to see how you get to your discernments into schemes and connections related to the topic. Your work is required to show what you arrived to from this research.

Ø     The Open Writing Assignment

“Analyze […] a character […] Compare and contrast two themes…” (Irvin, 2010, p. 12)

You have to determine your subject and your thesis statement. One has to comprehend the relevant pieces of information, and from there choose the proper theme. The most important is to determine your subject and reducing it to a malleable proportion.

Ø     Picking and Limiting a Writing Topic

Seek for what is of interest to you, as well as what gives you reachable results. Present your subject as an attractive interrogative. That interrogative will indicate you the best path to follow and what the core aspect of your statement is, as that statement will provide the result to that previous interrogative.

Reduce your subject to malleable proportions as it will make things easier.

Ø     Three Characteristics of Academic Writing

Thais and Zawacky say that there are three aspects:

1.     Perseverance, an open-mind, and method within the writer.
2.     Logic first; passions come in second place.
3.     Answers arrived at with the use of reason.

Everything mentioned in this section is what your examiners want to perceive in your written assignments.

THE FORMAT OF THE ACADEMIC ESSAY

Specific characteristics are attributed to the text. The format should not be arrived at with the use of formulas; the process requires flexibility.

Ø     Characteristics of the Critical Essay

1.     It “MAKES A POINT and SUPPORTS IT.” (Irvin, 2010, p. 15)
2.     The statement is naturally expository. Such claim is a declaration that is more suitably placed after the introductory paragraphs.
3.     Structure: “a clear introduction, body and conclusion.” (Irvin, 2010, p. 12)
4.     Supporting sources: The use of quotes indicating the sources of information is a must. No argument has to lack supporting elements. A sufficient amount of supporting material is needed, not only one piece of it.
5.     Every source of information has to be documented indicating its origin.
6.     “Transition” (Irvin, 2010, p. 16) sentences should be related to the main statement since hey indicate the theme of that part of your work.
7.     MLA or APA style is required.
8.     No inconveniences concerning grammar should be found in your essay.

CONCLUSION

The key is to comprehend one’s actions and the way in which one proceeds when working in an academic writing assignment. The base is to have the proper direction at the time of writing an essay.



Works Cited

Carroll, Lee Ann. Rehearsing New Roles: How College Students Develop as
Writers. Carbondale: Southern Illinois UP, 2002. Print.
Irvin, L. Lennie. What Is “Academic” Writing? Library of Congress Cataloging-in-
Publication Data, 2010. Print.
Thaiss, Chris and Terry Zawacki. Engaged Writers & Dynamic Disciplines:
Research on the Academic Writing Life. Portsmouth: Boynton/Cook, 2006. Print.

sábado, 7 de junio de 2014

Paragraphs: Corrections and Metacognitive Analysis

  • Original Paragraphs:

Causes of Students’ Failure

Children’s failing in schools is a very serious matter, and of course, there are some possible reasons for this to be happening which can be considered the most important ones. First of all, despite the fact of that a student’s success or failure through the different subjects has been for many years appreciated by the experts from a perspective that focuses on the individual features of a person, the characteristics of the context in which an infant or teenager is immersed in, such as his or her family and social and economical background, just to name a few examples, are a significant factor to take into account when looking for major causes that produce unsuccessful students. Secondly, as mentioned by Gardner, motivation, which can be instrumental or integrative, and the absence of it, play an important role which can also be crucial for the kind of performance a primary or secondary school learner may have through the course of a year. In the third place, it is also important to pay attention to the atmosphere that is generated by the teacher, because in many cases, a student’s level of anxiety can be too high and counter-productive, ending up as another reason for failure. Lastly, It is worth mentioning that according to the Vygotskian socio-historical theory, we humans learn collaboratively through a process later known by the name of scaffolding, in which expert and novice interact in order to solve a particular task; of course, if the task happens to be too demanding, the learner will end up failing in the enterprise of internalizing the tools that will allow him or her to perform the given task without the help of the teacher or a more advanced peer, and this of course can be what determines if the student will achieve the necessary level in order to be promoted or not. Evidently, the reasons for school failure in children can be varied, but the experts are beginning to realize that they should start looking for other possible triggers that, although it may sound rather strange for some, might be found outside the institutions and located especially in the rest of the community.

Working Women


In United States, a slow but significant improvement can be appreciated in the allowance of women to perform many types of jobs traditionally reserved for men. In the medicine area, for instance, in 1890, women constituted only 5 per cent of the doctors, whereas nowadays the percentage arises almost to 20 per cent. Similarly, legal jobs have shown an increasing acknowledgment in feminine rights: in 1930, from each 100 lawyers and judges, only 2 were women; that number reached to 22 in 1989. However, the most remarkable advance can be perceived in the political field-mainly due to its influence in the course of the Nation-in which women have been able to occupy sites of great influence as senators, majors, governors, Supreme Court judges, etc, in a relatively short period from the law that gave them the chance to vote in 1920. All these achievements leave open the hope of finding women, not only covering a larger number of employments, especially in new areas, but also contributing with their skills and capabilities in the most important making-decision jobs.


Cited Works

Shrum, J. & Glisan E. (2005) Understanding the Role of Contextualized Input, Output, and
Interaction in Language Learning. Teacher´s Handbook. Contextualized Language
Instruction. Boston.

Women's International Center (1995), Women's History in America

Presented by Women's International Center, Compton’s Newsmedia, inc., Retrieved

from http://www.wic.org/misc/history.htm


  • Rewritten Paragraphs:


Causes of Students’ Failure

There are external and internal reasons for children’s failure in schools. First of all, it is worth considering the social and economic background in which a student is immersed in. Secondly, concerning the internal aspect of the causes, instrumental or integrative motivation is critical to the attainment of success. In the third place, it is also important to pay attention to the atmosphere that is generated by the teacher, because in many cases, a student’s level of anxiety can be too high and counter-productive, ending up as another reason for failure. In addition, according to Vygotsky, we humans learn collaboratively through a process later known by the name of scaffolding; the teacher has to know how to provide this help to the student or things will not go well. Lastly, physical health almost always has consequences in cognitive development, so a previous medical history of several diseases is also a determining factor for underachievement. When we talk about children's failure in schools, we are talking about a social problem, not just an individual problem within the learner, so both internal and external factors have to be taken into account.



Working Women

A significant improvement can be appreciated in the allowance of women to perform many types of jobs traditionally reserved for men. In the medicine area, for instance, in 1890, women constituted only 5 per cent of the doctors, whereas nowadays the percentage arises almost to 20 per cent. Similarly, legal jobs have shown an increasing acknowledgment in feminine rights: in 1930, from each 100 lawyers and judges, only 2 were women; that number reached to 22 in 1989. However, the most remarkable advance can be perceived in the political field-mainly due to its influence in the course of the Nation-in which women have been able to occupy sites of great influence as senators, majors, governors, Supreme Court judges, etc, in a relatively short period from the law that gave them the chance to vote in 1920. All these achievements leave open the hope of finding women, not only covering a larger number of employments, especially in new areas, but also contributing with their skills and capabilities in the most important making-decision jobs.

  • Metacognitive Analysis:


After watching the videos about Paragraph Structure, going to the theory from the book From Paragraph to Essay and receiving the LEE IV teacher’s feedback, I could become aware of the mistakes I made when writing my paragraphs. Although the general structure was fine, the topic sentence of the first paragraph should have been more specific: the body sentences listed external and internal factors that could lead students to failure while the topic sentence prepared the reader to find “…reasons (…) which can be considered the most important ones.” That was too general and did not get to the point. Taking into account Halliday’s three functions of language, it can be said that the interpersonal was not fully achieved at some points: one of the sentences in particular was too long and there was too much circumlocution in general. Also the fact of mentioning “experts” stating something without citing any work that supports it is something out of the question in academic writing. In addition, despite the fact that there were isolated mistakes like for example writing “economical background” instead of “economic background” (awful mistake by the way), there weren’t significant problems regarding cohesion and the use of cohesive devices. Finally, there was circumlocution present in the conclusion sentence as well, including the use of terms like “triggers”, something that takes the reader too far from the main point of the paragraph. This metacognitive analysis and the teacher’s feedback contribute a lot to my future writing tasks because as a future teacher, it is crucial for me to enable readers to understand the ideas I want to transmit, and because I always want to give the best of myself.

viernes, 9 de mayo de 2014

Structure of a Well-Written Paragraph


American paragraph structure is different than the ones in other cultures:

  • The topic sentence:
- One central idea
- An opinion as an opener
- One thesis statement
- Has to be general
- Should be indented at the beginning

  • The body contains the details (sentences and all other ideas should be directly related to the main idea).
- Could be any length
- Details:
Why is this important?

What are the reasons?
Are there any examples of this?
- There are two ways of ordering details: taking into account their level of importance, and/or 
chronologically (order of events)
- The body should contain:
  Flow- bridges (Sentences with clear connections to preceding and subsequent 
  sentences, and paragraphs whose topic sentence is connected to the closing      sentence of the preceding one, and so on)
Key terms
Variety of words
Links between words
Synonyms in order to avoid repetition

  • Closing sentence
- Reminder of topic
    - Must keep the reader thinking
      - Must prepare the reader for the next paragraph
      • Other things to take into account in order to write well-written paragraphs and academic papers
      - Always ask yourself about what is expected of you
      - Use and make yourself fond of your module handbooks
      - What are the learning outcomes within this activity?
      - Use key direction words
      - Make a plan
      - Reread and edit
      - Proof read
      - Avoid going off on tangents
      - Always have the title in front of you
      - Provide a wide range of arguments


        Students: Rodrigo Alvarenga, Santiago Mazzei

        Cited Works
        engVid.com (2009, May 19). Parts of a Paragraph - English Academic Writing Introduction
        [Video file]. Retrieved from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCuExRE6N-4
        engVid.com (2013, July 22). Writing Skills: The Paragraph 
        [Video file]. Retrieved from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0IFDuhdB2Hk
        Edge Hill University (2013, Julne 20). Introduction to Academic Writing [Video file]. 
        Retrieved from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CelpkwseU5U

        domingo, 27 de abril de 2014

        Metacognitive Analysis of "Writing and Writers are a Must" Based on the Theory Developed in Our G-DOC

                  This metacognitive analysis has been written following The 5 Basic Stages of the Writing Process. The previous entry of this blog was a text that resulted from a task that consisted in spontaneously writing something about a particular given topic, with the purpose of making us students realise that no writing can be properly written without meeting certain conditions regarding its elaboration process. The following paragraphs are going to mension the steps or events that should have taken place before the "publishing" stage of Writing and Writers are a Must.
                  In the first place, in order o write a proper work, one should start by the "pre-writing" stage. For me, there has been no need of finding a topic to write about as it had already been given as part of the task. There has not been any kind of process related to building the idea I was supposed to write about or establishing the kind of public this work would be written for. A brainstorming, for example, would have given great results, although one can use freewriting for the same purpose as well. Planning a structure is something essential, and something that didn't take place in my writing process either, so instead of deciding which aspects of my idea I would write about, I started compulsively writing the first things that came to my mind. It has been like a freewriting of something not processed or not properly disassembled and examined.

        I used brainstorming in order to get the ideas that made it possible for me to write this entry.

                  Secondly, there has not been any draft made before declaring this work finished. Moreover, Writing and Writers are a Must itself could be taken as a draft of something that lacks a proper shape or consistency.

        The draft I made in order to get to the final product (this writing)
        The draft I used in order to get to the definitive version of this entry.

                  In the third place, it is obvious that there has not been an opportunity of revising the work at any extent. No questions regarding the level of detail or the logical order in which ideas are presented have been considered (mentioning Vigotsky and suddenly jumping to the Greek philosophers all of a sudden is a clear example of this). Moreover, no additions, rearrangements, removals or replacements of information have taken place.
                  A fourth fact worthmentioning is that this work has been put through an editing process, but taking into account that there was no final product the author (I) might have had in mind (no target public, etc.), it has been "editing for the sake of editing" and nothing more.
                  Finally, the fifth and last stage of the writing process is the "publishing" stage. Although Writing and Writers are a Must has been posted on the internet through Blogger, this event was not part of this stage due to the fact that its publishing was not part of any set of stages in any kind of process: it is a "purposeless written work that has been published just because it was part of a given task."
                  A writing is not such if it does not meet certain conditions that have to do with its elaboration process, as it has been mentioned before. In order to write a proper article, paper, story or any kind of written production, there are certain aspects that have to be taken into consideration as it has been described. Following The 5 Basic Stages of the Writing Process is one of the keys to a successful writing.

        Click here to go to the G-DOC that we had to write about The 5 Basic Stages of the Writing Process!

        martes, 22 de abril de 2014

        Writing and Writers are a Must

                  Writing is a tool which has the function of expressing thought. It is a vehicle for thought.
        As humans, we have the need of communicating our ideas to others. We are social beings, it is in our nature.
                  Vigotsky said that writing is a instrument of semiotic mediation, acquired in most cases in an educational institution, that at the same time enables us to internalize others of its kind. This is why writing is said to have a double function, as well as reading. It is part of the Advanced Superior Psychological Processes, and only humans are capable of acquiring it.
                  Western philosophers in the ancient Greece began to express their ideas and concepts through the written language and that, at the same time, influenced other philosophers and thinkers years and years after them. To have a clear proof (ideologically speaking) of the development of Mankind, the base for every single achievement of the species has probably been written somewhere (even if it is not in a common or average style).
                  The purpose of writing can be varied, as we can write to create a work of art, to inform of a scientific discovery, to express our feelings in a catarctic event, to share any kind of knowledge, etc.
                  I personally believe writing is a must because without the ability of doing so, leaving aside all the physical and mental advantages it rewards us with, we would be unable to share our own "self" with the universal self we are all part of.
                  Writers, on the other hand, are very important for the world because they carry the gift of being the voice of those who sometimes cannot have a voice, those to whom fate has not been kind, those who seek for a remedy to ease a mental pain. But also of those who enjoy a pleasant and quiet life, those who want to share a possitive message.
                  Moreover, writers are the influence of those who have not yet started their adventure,those who feel they want to be part of the great poem that life is, and want to contribute with a verse.

        Welcome to my new Blog!

        Hi! my name is Santiago Mazzei and I hope you enjoy this Blog's development as I will be writing some entries during the course of the year. Have fun! :)